Further development after crit

I had a crit on the day I needed to submit work for YCN, so went ahead with the current designs but wanted to continue to develop the work.

Feedback from the crit

It was immediately commented on how corporate it all looked, probably due to the photographs being themselves quite corporate. Therefore by changing the images to something more personal, that actually looked like an example of what they would expect as the campaign.

Compfight was suggested as a good example of how to get some images that I was looking for.
Lomography too.

Applying these images to the same context changes the tone of voice and this is something that I'll be exploring...